I say, you should have lots of popularity! Even though I've only read Ch.1 of The Village Guardians, I think it is, by far the best Pokemon story I have ever found! I'm genuinly lucky I've found you! The story was great, and I've never really been this eager to read something! It's very well written, without the use of sexual themes or cursing (I think... I gotta bad memory sometimes. Plus it's 11:06 PM at my house)! And I also have stories that I need to finish. But I feel like I'm running out of ideas... I like to RP with my characters (There's 20-something of them, plus a few I may add to the list). I'm sure you, and at least a few other random people, would like them! So far, all I have are some pictures of the sky, and one journal entry with the list of characters I have. I think I have an eye for good stories and stuff, but I have doubts. Anyways, after reading all of that, I think you know how much I like the story and the writing ability of whoever made it and anybody who helped the writer and also how much I like Pokemon... sorta. I also completely agree with 's critique on Ch.1! And also some of the comments, too! And I REALLY hope Ch.4-16 isn't the end! It had me hooked from even Ch.1-1! I think that's all my derpy mind can produce at 11:21 PM... I'm seriously debating wether or not to read the rest of the story, go to bed, or watch YouTube... Welp, that's all for now. 'Night.
So glad to hear you enjoyed the first book, if you will, in The Village Guardians series. If you have not yet read them, I would suggest starting with the original trilogy: The Village Guardian, Project Omega and The Final Strike as those provide a lot of back-story the The Village Guardians series.
At any rate, thank you very much for checking out these stories and I hope you will enjoy reading more of them. ^_^
And, eh... apparently I thought the original trilogy was the actual story. now I gotta go back and read the actual books! Ah, well. It'll give me something to read! I like reading, so i'll be just fine! Still fantastic!
And you're very welcome! I can't wait to read more from you! I wouldn't care what the subject is, if you write it, I'll read it! That is a fact! (Still can't believe you're not famous! Print this stuff out and just hand it to people and charge them a dollar or something!)
P.S. It seems I missed your birthday, sorry and happy late birthday?
Actually, on second thought... I don't know what to think. I'm kinda confused, but nothing to worry about! It's not your fault, it's my derpy mind. Anyways, have fun! And good luck on anything that you need luck for!
My mind is fixed now, so no confusion! Yay! Now I know what's happening now correctly! Back to reading, but with less confusion! And I don't feel like repeating the last two sentences from my last comment, so yeah. Be careful!
Just finished reading the whole thing last night! It was amazing! Upload the rest when you and your bro deem it uploadable! My only regret is reading it as quick as I did. It may not have appeared as such, but I was really reading quite quickly. Anyways, good luck on everything that you could possibly need luck for!